You’ve heard how using Deep POV can enhance your WIP, but do you struggle to put it into practice? I will go through your manuscript and bring it into Deep POV for only.003 cents per word (introductory rate). I’ve found this is the most effective way for it to “click” so that you can learn to make the switch yourself. Whether it’s an entire manuscript or the first few chapters, I’d love to help bring readers into your character’s heart and mind. Message me with questions or to book.

I’ll provide an in-depth critique of your manuscript, focusing on the following: identifying passive phrasing, repetitive words, and weasel words, as well as areas where you can enhance wording for clarity and impact. I’ll pay special attention to the beginning and ending of your scenes and offer suggestions for improvement if needed. The introductory rate for this service is $1 a page. Whether you’d like me to critique one chapter or your entire manuscript, I’ll help your work shine. 

Do you want to Indie/self-publish but don’t know where to start? For only $25, you’ll get an hour-long Zoom call with me. We’ll review your goals, and you will walk away with personalized, actionable steps that will help you prepare your book for publication. We can also dive into strategies for marketing your book. Say goodbye to overwhelm and hello to being an indie author. 

Does your story start in the right place? Is your characterization consistent and resonent? Do you keep up the pacing and tension? With my developmental editing service, I’ll provide a report detailing actionable steps to improve your manuscript’s plot, setting, characterization, and theme.